Comments on: can you help me edit this short paragraph in to a better one?

By: a_super_tech

a_super_tech — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 21:32:17 +0000

There can be no direct comparison between traditional businesses with foot-traffic and face to face sales and the dot.coms that rely solely on web-traffic to bring the customer to their products. Although the end result is the same: the customer purchases the product, the market strategies for both approaches are completely different because the path to the customer is completely different. Another key difference is competition versus convenience. In the real world, competitive sales for a certain product could be miles away, while the internet competition is only a ‘click’ away. For instance, in traditional business, a product is easily sold to the end customer by simple interaction between the salesperson and the customer. In the dot.com world of internet traffic, customers have to be drawn to the website. In order for one to succeed at an online business, the main point of concern is the website. The website must be easy to find from a variety of search engines, it must be user-friendly or simple for everyone to use, and it must focus on the products in which are intended to be sold. Other factors which contribute to the success of a dot.com, to a lesser degree, would be the cost of the web-hosting, the cost of website maintenance, and product margins.

By: Hair*Fairy

Hair*Fairy — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 01:39:45 +0000

In the virtual world manufacturers can succeed at selling their product by interacting with the customers and following marketing strategies. However, in the e-world, with no personal interaction all marketing is guessing game . To succeed at online business a manufacturer needs their website to be as simple, focused and as maintenance-free as possible. As well as low cost, credible, and a powerful traffic builder and customer converter.

By: jackbutler5555

jackbutler5555 — Wed, 15 Apr 2009 17:48:19 +0000

A key disadvantage on-line businesses have is that they can not transact business face-to-face. To offset this disadvantage, online businesses must have websites which are simple, focused, maintenance-free, economical, and credible. Those kinds of websites builds traffic and creates customer loyalty.

By: invadedminds

invadedminds — Tue, 14 Apr 2009 02:56:38 +0000

In the real world manufacturers can sell a product by using face to face interactions strategies. In the e-world there is no face to face interaction with customers which may desperate them to turn in to healthy customers for site owners. To succeed in the e-worl manufacturers need a website that is simply focused, low maintenance, lost cost, credible, produces traffic and converts customers.

By: bree

bree — Sun, 12 Apr 2009 23:05:03 +0000

In the real world manufacturers sell products easily with interacting behaviors and marketing strategies. In the e-world there is no face to face interactions which means all marketing is interaction with site visitors which sometmimes may force them to turn into healthy customers. In order to succeed at online business manufacturers need a website that is simple, focused, maintenance-free, low cost, credible, and a has a powerful traffic builder and customer converter.

By: Landa M

Landa M — Fri, 10 Apr 2009 04:25:16 +0000

In today’s society manufacturers can sell a product easily by interacting behavior and effective marketing strategies. In the world of today where there is limited face to face interaction and most marketing is a game of site interaction with site visitors which may (not sure what you are trying to say here). To succeed in an on-line business, manufactures need a website that is user friendly, focused, maintenance-free, low cost, credible and a powerful traffic builder and customer converter.

By: kiesha

kiesha — Wed, 08 Apr 2009 10:55:10 +0000

In the real world manufacturers can sell a product easily by interactive behavior and marketing strategies. However, in the e-world, marketing is a game of site’s interaction with site visitors not face to face interaction. In order to succeed with an online business, manufacturers must provide a website which is simple, focused, maintenanced -free, cost efficient, credible, customer converter, and a powerful traffic builder.

Hopefull this will help you out….

By: music man 3

music man 3 — Mon, 06 Apr 2009 00:43:35 +0000

In the real world manufacturer(s) can sell a product very easily by their interacting behavior and their marketing strategies. But in the e-world where there is no face to face interaction(s) and all marketing is totally a game of (the) site’s interaction with (the) site(’s) visitors(,) which may (persuade) them to turn into healthy customers for site owner(s). To succeed at online business, manufacturer(s) need a website which is simple, focused, maintenance-free, low cost, credible, and a powerful traffic builder and customer converter.

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By: Del Piero 10

Del Piero 10 — Sun, 05 Apr 2009 23:03:22 +0000

Sorry, you need a complete re-write. It sounds like Tonto from the Lone Ranger wrote it.

By: Sarah C

Sarah C — Sat, 04 Apr 2009 09:59:11 +0000

Yes, but then how will you know what to do the next time?

After all, a parent could carry her baby everywhere for years faster than waiting for the child to learn to walk.